I'm Letting go and starting a new Day
Im only human and thats my saving grace…
Im only human and thats my saving grace..
Window plate,what a state,staring at your empty face,
Window blind, by design,traces whipped, Nothing left, Tears left,
Window clean,How can it seem?I feel nothing,window clean,I see nothing,
Windows dirt,holds the past,soul is hurt,heart is burnt..
Months of searching,longer days of feeling,
Happiness,escape,peace,just feeling,
Its not that simple to wake up and master,
The art of how to move on after,
He left me feeling pain and anger,
Secy is not dead shes stuck in anger,
Mercy lies in those who give closure,
Left me wanting reasons colder,
Left me feeling,feeling older,
Let me feeling,feeling broken.
Going to that place was for me only,
A place of peace,now a nightmare to me,
Test of time on my heart,
Complacent time sets me apart,
Same rush,same divide,
Same rush,same divide,
Same rush,same divide,
Different feeling,
Now this little girl blind no longer,
Sees clarity in reality,love no longer,
Sees meaning in justice and charity in action,
Responsibility in freedom,Rebirth in situation,
This place I found to be full of you,
Is full of a past I once knew,
You broke my heart and now its on this road,
A road i crossed from now to old,
Love the fact that I’ve learnt,not regretted,
Love the fact I’ve learnt,
Love,
Love the fact that I’m letting go of a memory,of a ghost,
Letting go of a ghost,
Letting go..
Through the window, a little fairy girl wept. Her disguise unveiled, her heart broken, but she lets go to start afresh
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Control.. Nectar of the Gods
if u read my latest poem ull realize that control is not enough when it comes to what we dont know.
Thank you for commenting on almost everything you freak!…your part of the reason i let go,n u always will be.
Test of time on my heart,
Complacent time sets me apart,
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very effective writing..
your image is elegant.
Thanks for attending poets rally.
Happy Rally.
have fun visiting..
🙂
You have really motivated me! I’m so encouraged by the fact that you think my poetry is elegant! iNFACT, It’s weird because you kno so many other poets. I’m so honoured. Thanks jingle!
Sing it! This would make a good song about heartache. Nice contribution to the Rally!
haha!i will!thanks
Wow, thanks!I’ll also check out your poems.
BtW, You can also read the rest of my blog if you like 🙂
Fantastic write! This is a wonderful journey into everything human and raw. The experience is a great journey, for sure. Thanks for sharing this with us! Jingle is right, you writing is quite elegant
Oh my,thank you so much!I,m excited to read your stuff too
letting go is the toughest thing to do in my opinion =)
Mercy lies in those who give closure,
Left me wanting reasons colder,
the hardest part is letting go and if left without reason its painful
Liked it 😀
cheers!!!
😀 i’m glad you liked it so much!!And you can relate to it too. That’s awesome.cheers!
Eloquent elegance my lady. I especially liked the lines
“Now this little girl blind no longer,
Sees clarity in reality,love no longer,”
The way you use repetition to emphesise some lines almost gives it a song lie quality that is very affective. A potent poem. Hope you manage to let go better than I ever did.
The Lonely Recluse.
Very beautiful poem! We all need to learn to let go of the ghosts of our past, the ghosts that broke our heart.
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Hi jingle!thanks,ill try my best to nominate others. But have yourself a merry christmas and a happy new year!!
nice. beautiful poetry
Love, like a flower, blooms and withers and dies. There are reasons why some things are better ended. These reasons may be hard for us to fathom, but trust that in one way or another, it is fate’s way of shaping us – or should i say sharpening us- to become a better person.
Something happened to me recently and it is similar to this one. Only thing is, the person has been lost to me for 6 years, and this is the only time when I started really letting go and moving on. The process is slow and painful, but I am taking one step at a time. I know I would succeed in the end. 🙂
Thank you for this poetry and capturing one complexity of the human emotions.
Happy Holidays!
Cha
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